A human test subject’s pursuit of freedom put’s his life in jeopardy when he interferes with a narcissistic scientist’s hunger for global mind control.
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Here is a take that addresses how the protag may go against the mind control plot:
"The first human test subject for a global mind control conspiracy discovers an immunity that makes him the only one able to stop it."
There's really a lot you could do here. You can make the immunity obvious: the mind control works on everyone but him. Or you could make the immunity "proactive": the hero is able to use mind control as well. This would make your hero like Neo from The Matrix, or Luke in Star Wars, able to use the supernatural power that enslaves against the force of evil itself.
As Tony Edward said.
>>puts his life and freedom in jeopardy
That's standard operating procedure for movies of this (of most) genres. What is the specific nature of the jeopardy that makes it unique, distinct from all those other movies?
>>when he interferes
Again, that's SOP in most movies of this (of most) genres: the protagonist interferes, opposes, frustrates --and eventually defeats the antagonist. How? What, specifically, MUST he do in this case?
Hi lewisricekrisy --
I like the set-up, but we need to know HOW he interferes... I can't see what the test subject actually has to do -- he could 'interfere with him in any number of ways, and the WAY he interferes directly impacts on the stakes/ drama/ awesomenous/ marketability etc etc of the story.
Anyways, best of luck, below is just a take, with liberties etc...:
A test subject from an underground mind control laboratory escapes with a crazed scientist's plans for world domination, and must convince the authorities before he's used to assassinate the president.