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My initial thought was "that's hilarious". Because I can't take it seriously if the ghost first has a pleasant evening of sex and THEN starts getting vengeful. Your set up is whacky in the kind of way that comedies can get away with, but not thrillers.
As Richiev asked:? What happens next?? What's the plot that follows from the situation?? What must the protagonist do when she is mistaken for the murderer?
As Richiev asked:? What happens next?? What's the plot that follows from the situation?? What must the protagonist do when she is mistaken for the murderer?