Things get hot in a Dead Zone for a “Bad Bug Collector” after an accidental viral release on a tropical island.

by Kaznats · Logliner · 315 pts 537 views

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Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

I agree with dpg, ?Also you should give us an bad guy. Here would be an example. ?"When the umbrella corporation accidental releases a deadly virus on a remote tropical island..."

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

As suggested by Richiev, the logline lacks clarity.

And an objective goal for the protagonist. ?What is he supposed to do after "things get hot" ?(whatever that means) ? ?What's his objective goal?

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

As suggested by Richiev, the logline lacks clarity.

And an objective goal for the protagonist. ?What is he supposed to do after "things get hot" ?(whatever that means) ? ?What's his objective goal?