Two gay couple face religious governmental charges for being gay in a third world country and their sentence is death by stoning, but both believe there is a way out.

Thank you guys, I'll work on it.

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I agree that the logline needs a goal, but I don't see why the logline needs to single out one character over another. ?The story is about a couple ?fighting for their relationship, for love. They are equal participants in the struggle, equal stakeholders in the outcome.

Just as in "Brokeback Mountain", the two gay cowboys are equal participants and equal stake holders in their struggle to define their relationship in the homophobic culture of the rural West.

I agree that the logline needs a goal, but I don't see why the logline needs to single out one character over another. ?The story is about a couple ?fighting for their relationship, for love. They are equal participants in the struggle, equal stakeholders in the outcome.

Just as in "Brokeback Mountain", the two gay cowboys are equal participants and equal stake holders in their struggle to define their relationship in the homophobic culture of the rural West.