A space explorer leads an expedition after believing to have discovered paradise which gradually descends into madness.

The goal is obvious enough to me (although the wording may need a polish): ?he's Moses-in-outer-space leading his crew to ?a better world, to an alluring paradise.

But is it the real deal, or only a mirage? ?Is the descent into madness the result of pursuing a delusion?

I sense some interesting raw ore for a psycho-drama, but I think the concept needs refining.

The goal is obvious enough to me (although the wording may need a polish): ?he's Moses-in-outer-space leading his crew to ?a better world, to an alluring paradise.

But is it the real deal, or only a mirage? ?Is the descent into madness the result of pursuing a delusion?

I sense some interesting raw ore for a psycho-drama, but I think the concept needs refining.

Is finding paradise the inciting incident? If so what is the causal connection to his goal? And as Richiev asked, what is his goal?