Two occult detectives must investigate a murder at a prestigious boys boarding school when the body of a missing boy is discovered.

'When the defiled body of a missing child is discovered, an impassive occult-detective is given a task to decipher the mysterious crime of the city.'

You must establish a main character to your story. When you tell a story there must be a view point to tell from.

Given that you follow lead detective as your main character. Establish a plot where your main character is facing difficulties to show emotions because of his past. Relate his past to the story's plot.
E.g., Here you will reveal in the end that the boy's bully-victim murdered him. Relate this to detective's past by creating a story where he had a abusive childhood, he wanted to do something about it, but he was never able to... something that can give a dramatic touch to your story. Connect the dots by transforming your character to understand this child's emotion, and make him do something extraordinary for the child. I think, audience will always love such thing.

Write a 25 page story on your idea. It does not matter what you write, you will find a way to give your story a proper justification.

As the others have said.? If the detectives specialize in the occult, it doesn't make sense that they don't believe the cause of death was supernatural.? And why must there be two detectives?? Who of the two is the protagonist, the lead detective in the case? (There is always one -- that's standard operating procedure)

As the others have said.? If the detectives specialize in the occult, it doesn't make sense that they don't believe the cause of death was supernatural.? And why must there be two detectives?? Who of the two is the protagonist, the lead detective in the case? (There is always one -- that's standard operating procedure)