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nicholasandrewhalls: I would like to thank you for the constructive criticism. I know you have posted comments on the various loglines I have written in the past. I would just like to thank you for being 100% real with me. I will go back and rewrite it again. I am actually going to move forward with this concept and write the screenplay.
Thanks for all the feedback!
Very solid logline. Well written.
Playing devil's advocate ... do you need "Weeks into a zombie outbreak" if you end the logline with "who's missing in a zombie ravage(there should be a d on the end of this word) New York."?
It's good :)
I love the zombie genre, and this sounds pretty awesome. Great stuff.
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