When a apathetic policeman’s new-born son is kidnapped he will do everything in his power to expose a corrupted Chinese state and it’s network of child traffickers to get his son back.

Hi, small thing:

Making it 'when an apathetic policeman' rather than 'when a apathetic policeman' will makes this logline read better.

andrewclau:

I like both!

And the government policy of one-child per family raises the stakes: Ttis is not only his son, but the only child he's ever supposed to have. And, as in most cultures (alas) boys are preferred to girls.

Best wishes with your story.

andrewclau:

I like both!

And the government policy of one-child per family raises the stakes: Ttis is not only his son, but the only child he's ever supposed to have. And, as in most cultures (alas) boys are preferred to girls.

Best wishes with your story.