When a foster care teen learns of his biological father’s death, he must undergo a mystic rite of passage to claim his inheritance. (23)

>>The evil dwarf-like creature appears and begins to torment the boy.

As this character has appeared in severalof your loglines, I venture to surmise that you're looking for a plot vehicle in which to ?cast an evil dwarf. ?Why? What makes this character so dramatically interesting to you?

>>The evil dwarf-like creature appears and begins to torment the boy.

As this character has appeared in severalof your loglines, I venture to surmise that you're looking for a plot vehicle in which to ?cast an evil dwarf. ?Why? What makes this character so dramatically interesting to you?

Dpg and Nir,

Thanks for your input. It's really great having, not one but, two experienced logliners to bounce ideas around with. Everyone in my life is pretty much completely uninterested in stories. I NEED YOU GUYS SO BAD!!! Without you I'm in darkness. Thank you for being here!

Okay, so back to this story of mine. What about the following:

A daydreaming teen learns he must undergo a Rite of Passage on his 16th Birthday to claim his father's fortune and free himself from reality.