“When a high school student’s negative emotions manifest in the form of other students, he will have to vanquish each one before they spread their emotions and cause complete chaos.”

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Behind the Eyes (Short Film, Action/Philosophical Thriller)

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Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

Thanks. What hooks me on your logline is that I work in mental health; your concept has strong affinities with key aspects of Jungian psychology, the shadow, projection. Although you seem to have in mind a film short, I can imagine characters and scenes arising from the premise that would fill a feature film.

You're right, emotions can be gender neutral; they can be projected equitably between the sexes. Color coding is a nice touch; it'll help the audience keep score. Best wishes with your project.

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

Thanks. What hooks me on your logline is that I work in mental health; your concept has strong affinities with key aspects of Jungian psychology, the shadow, projection. Although you seem to have in mind a film short, I can imagine characters and scenes arising from the premise that would fill a feature film.

You're right, emotions can be gender neutral; they can be projected equitably between the sexes. Color coding is a nice touch; it'll help the audience keep score. Best wishes with your project.

KnowledgeKnight · Logliner · 375 pts

Not sure at this point the mixture of male and female projections. I don't think it would matter if there was a female projection coming out of a male body, because it is an emotion and emotions are not gender specific. By the way the emotions are Guilt (dressed in white), Anger (dressed in red), Depression (dressed in blue), Pain (dressed in yellow), and fear (dressed in black).
Thanks for responding back so quickly. I see your comments everywhere on this site. You really are a blessing to the creative community. :)