When a shy guy uses his lighter for the first time while talking to a pretty girl at a house party with dim lighting and strong winds outside the house, he must make a choice: is it lit, or isn’t it?

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Former member · Legend · 114,968 pts

This is very vague, even if it was a logline for a short film or scene tell the story. Why would he have to make the choice? What does the girl have to do with the lighter and why is he using his lighter? If it's windy outside, what is the relation to the lighter?inside? It's all very disconnected.

Karel Segers · Mentor · 2,830 pts

This is very vague, even if it was a logline for a short film or scene tell the story. Why would he have to make the choice? What does the girl have to do with the lighter and why is he using his lighter? If it's windy outside, what is the relation to the lighter?inside? It's all very disconnected.