When a shy teenager finds herself torn between her life-long best friend and a potential new love, she discovers one of them is a projection of her mental illness.
Categories: Drama
4 reviews
The logline seems to gives away the Big Reveal, something a logline should never do.
If the audience has to wait until the 3rd act to find out that one of them is a figment of her imagination, what is to keep them interested in the story until then? ? What is her objective goal up to that point? ? That is what the logline should be about.
The logline seems to gives away the Big Reveal, something a logline should never do.
If the audience has to wait until the 3rd act to find out that one of them is a figment of her imagination, what is to keep them interested in the story until then? ? What is her objective goal up to that point? ? That is what the logline should be about.
Hi, Why is the teen torn?between the two? Is her life-long friendship threatened by the potential boyfriend? ?Will she lose one if she chooses the other and why?