When Air Force One crashes, a journalist discovers a cover up after gaining access to the plane’s black box data and must unravel the mystery.

The logline is effective because it makes it easy to visualize a surprised and scared journalist. A three dimensional journalist, with conflicts and a character flaw, would add interest. We feel sympathy for him, and cheer for him, but need some reason to identify with him.

And is the Pres or Veep injured or killed in the accident? What's at stake in terms of whose life was in jeopardy on the plane?

And is the Pres or Veep injured or killed in the accident? What's at stake in terms of whose life was in jeopardy on the plane?