When he learns the one that got away is getting married, a man sets about winning her back, with the help of the fiancé’s ex, only to fall for her as well.

Thanks for the feedback everyone. I've since tweaked this idea and will post again with a new logline.

I don't see why fickleness can't work as a character flaw. Although I'm not sure that is his subjective personal problem issue in this story.? And isn't it possible that the protagonist and the fianc??s ex have the same subjective issue to deal with?? After all, the groom-to-be is the one who got away from her.? If she didn't have some emotional investment in her ex, why would she cooperate?

Whatever, the focus of? a logline is on the? objective goal the character wants to achieve, not the subjective problem he needs to resolve.

I agree with yqwertz that modern audiences have come to expect a Happy Ever After ending for romances. But I also agree with mikepedley85 that there can be exceptions.? And I would add to his list "The Fault in Our Stars".

I don't see why fickleness can't work as a character flaw. Although I'm not sure that is his subjective personal problem issue in this story.? And isn't it possible that the protagonist and the fianc??s ex have the same subjective issue to deal with?? After all, the groom-to-be is the one who got away from her.? If she didn't have some emotional investment in her ex, why would she cooperate?

Whatever, the focus of? a logline is on the? objective goal the character wants to achieve, not the subjective problem he needs to resolve.

I agree with yqwertz that modern audiences have come to expect a Happy Ever After ending for romances. But I also agree with mikepedley85 that there can be exceptions.? And I would add to his list "The Fault in Our Stars".