After nearly dying of a heart attack, a morbidly obese junk-food addict gives herself a year to get in shape to finish the London marathon.

After nearly dying of a heart attack, a morbidly obese food junkie gives herself one year to get in shape to run the London marathon.
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I see no need to insert the trainer "B" story into the logline.? It's a natural subplot, but the? main plot isn't about the relationship -- it's about the struggle to? be able to run the marathon.

After nearly dying of a heart attack, a morbidly obese food junkie gives herself one year to get in shape to run the London marathon.
(25 words)

I see no need to insert the trainer "B" story into the logline.? It's a natural subplot, but the? main plot isn't about the relationship -- it's about the struggle to? be able to run the marathon.

It seems like she solved her problem in the logline ... so I don't need to read the whole script/watch the movie?

Besides the tedious difficulty of training for a marathon ... what's the conflict that sustains a feature runtime?