When the prison transfer bus crashes in a remote mountain forest, a rookie officer must use her training to tame the violent inmates as well as survive against dangerous wildlife and a harsh blizzard while they await rescue.

Less is more...

Pick one big problem for the rookie to overcome in her mission and describe only that in the logline. All the other problems are good and would likely work well in the script but the logline needs to describe only the major obstacle.

>>>?beginning of a zombocalypse

Now the story? jumps the rails and become? something else in another genre.

What is the itch you're trying to scratch with this story?? What is the theme you want to explore?? What's? your story hook?

>>>?beginning of a zombocalypse

Now the story? jumps the rails and become? something else in another genre.

What is the itch you're trying to scratch with this story?? What is the theme you want to explore?? What's? your story hook?