Whenever a pain in the ass hitman sleeps, he always wakes up to a new future in the middle of his next hit until he decides to stay up and abandon mission, and discovers a thieves’ guild’s plot to rob Big Pharm of a drug that grants immortal health, no sleep required.

Agreed with all the above comments.

In order to help simplify the concept, I think best if you choose one job in which he wakes up and tell the story around that. This way you can use the first time he wakes up in the middle of a future mission as his inciting incident.

Yeah, too complicated. ? ?I'm intrigued by a hit man who always wakes up in the middle of his next hit, but the rest of it just doesn't seem make sense.

To really score big, the thieves have to steal the formula -- not just the drug ---so they can reproduce a generic knock-off. ?But isn't that just a matter of chemistry? ?All they need is to analyze a sample and then replicate it?

Yeah, too complicated. ? ?I'm intrigued by a hit man who always wakes up in the middle of his next hit, but the rest of it just doesn't seem make sense.

To really score big, the thieves have to steal the formula -- not just the drug ---so they can reproduce a generic knock-off. ?But isn't that just a matter of chemistry? ?All they need is to analyze a sample and then replicate it?