300 years ago, the Penitente rose from the ashes of the Pueblo Revolts. Today Diana believes her family’s dark past has caught up to her when the body of a crucified man is found in the desert.

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Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Hard to add any useful notes to the comments above.
I would say that for me the logline is confusing and vague in its descriptions, I needed to read it twice to get an idea of the characters and their actions.

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

As the others said. ?What does it mean that "her family's dark past has caught up to her"? ? ?That's vague and ?it's back story. How does that back story translate into a specific objective goal going forward in the present time of the film narrative? ? Who is the antagonist? ?What's at stake?

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

As the others said. ?What does it mean that "her family's dark past has caught up to her"? ? ?That's vague and ?it's back story. How does that back story translate into a specific objective goal going forward in the present time of the film narrative? ? Who is the antagonist? ?What's at stake?