While an elderly woman lies in a comatose state, God grants her a second chance at redemption, for triggering world war 3 in her youth.

I thought "An elderly woman lies in a coma, when God grants her a second chance at redemption" has so many possibilities on so many levels for deep and philosphical drama (my weak spot) that it was intriguing.

But "?after she triggers world war 3" has no commection to the start and is (for me) unbeliveable.

Be keen to see your next iteration.

Lx

Thanks, Christopher, for the additional information. Did she intentionally cause World War 3?

Is God a character in the movie?... as in, do we, the audience, actually hear his voice?

She made a decision that was instrumental in triggering World War 3. The Coma, well that's a secret.

Hi Christopher Hart,

The stakes are clear in your logline.

What did the woman do to place her soul in jeopardy? How does the coma influence what happens in your story?

Looking forward to learning more.

The logline is a premise that raises more questions than answers. Like:
How can she damn her soul while in a coma? (For that matter, how can anyone damn their soul?)
Why would god give her a 2nd chance?
What does she need to do with her 2nd chance? (objective goal)