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Elizabeth, can I ask why you mashed the two loglines together? I did say the second version was another try at the logline. It's not an addendum to the original.
I appreciate your interest, both of you, but I'm scratching my head to understand where any of this is helping me. I may bow out of the whole thing, with respect.
Elizabeth, can I ask why you mashed the two loglines together? I did say the second version was another try at the logline. It's not an addendum to the original.
I appreciate your interest, both of you, but I'm scratching my head to understand where any of this is helping me. I may bow out of the whole thing, with respect.
Now I am more confused than ever. Originally you said that she falls in love with the wife of the Iranian nuclear physicist. In the above you say she sends her lesbian lover to seduce the head of the weapons program.....Ah, lightbulb! So, the lover is a bisexual who is the wife of one of many Iranian physicists whom the Mossad agent falls in love with and seduces and then she sends her to seduce the head of the weapons programme? Is this a comedy, an X- rated sex romp among physicists? .... Seriously....what's the game? Like Karel said, I don't see an original story. Sorry.
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