1. Posted: May 27, 2013In:

    On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

    Alexpsmith Penpusher

    Thanks for your feedback. Switched Order. Chiseled Vocabulary. Added Verbose. :) Cheers ;)

    Thanks for your feedback. Switched Order. Chiseled Vocabulary. Added Verbose. 🙂
    Cheers 😉

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  2. Posted: May 27, 2013In:

    On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

    Alexpsmith Penpusher

    If the Antagonist vows to kill himself there is no Movie. As above said there has to be some connection, change of heart that makes it an option to change direction. Why does he have to out run this Enforcer.....What about the boss?

    If the Antagonist vows to kill himself there is no Movie.
    As above said there has to be some connection, change of heart that makes it an option to change direction.
    Why does he have to out run this Enforcer…..What about the boss?

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  3. Posted: June 15, 2015In:

    When a car – jacking goes wrong a young gang banger is pitted against police, but when the governors daughter is kidnapped he will be given one last chance at redemption.

    Alexpsmith Penpusher

    The lone teenager is picked because he has had previous dealings with the crooked ministerial militia that is responsible for the governors daughters kidnapping. Kind of like Micheal Douglas in Black Rain. He can hit the mark and take him out.

    The lone teenager is picked because he has had previous dealings with the crooked ministerial militia that is responsible for the governors daughters kidnapping.

    Kind of like Micheal Douglas in Black Rain. He can hit the mark and take him out.

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