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After one of them runs over his loving girlfriend while intoxicated, two teenage boys set off across the northern U.S. looking for a secure place to dump the body as soon as possible, while their friendship and criminal minds are tested.
Thank you for the additional information. I will give it some thought and share additional ideas.
Thank you for the additional information. I will give it some thought and share additional ideas.
See lessAfter one of them runs over his loving girlfriend while intoxicated, two teenage boys set off across the northern U.S. looking for a secure place to dump the body as soon as possible, while their friendship and criminal minds are tested.
Hi Carter Breaux, I am hearing two ideas in your logline--one is a "road trip" across the Northern US and the other idea is an "imperative" to dump the body as soon as possible. Which is most important to you? If they are looking for a quick disposal, finding a "secure" site will not take very longRead more
Hi Carter Breaux, I am hearing two ideas in your logline–one is a “road trip” across the Northern US and the other idea is an “imperative” to dump the body as soon as possible. Which is most important to you? If they are looking for a quick disposal, finding a “secure” site will not take very long and I don’t think will require a trip through multiple states. If the two friends were looking for a “special spot” to honor the loving girlfriend I could see that crossing a few states. Looking forward to hearing more of your ideas.
See lessWhen a highly respectable real estate attorney stumbles on the bullet-ridden body of a client, he must investigate his own firm to uncover their involvement in the murder.
Thanks for your feedback. Here's a revised logline. When a highly respectable real estate attorney stumbles on the bullet-ridden body of a client, he must investigate his own firm to save his reputation. Do you think this better explains why he does not call the police? Thanks again.
Thanks for your feedback. Here’s a revised logline.
When a highly respectable real estate attorney stumbles on the bullet-ridden body of a client, he must investigate his own firm to save his reputation.
Do you think this better explains why he does not call the police?
Thanks again.
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