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When a 50-foot-tall Maine moose destroys forests and attacks people, biologist Dan Gellerston must confront dark secrets from his past to find a way to stop the monster.
Conflict: Richiev, your word edits are greatly appreciated. You guessed, quite correctly, that it is the protagonist's past associations with a lab that represent the dark secrets in the logline. As a university student, the protagonist has a romantic relationship with a female student as they workRead more
Conflict: Richiev, your word edits are greatly appreciated. You guessed, quite correctly, that it is the protagonist’s past associations with a lab that represent the dark secrets in the logline. As a university student, the protagonist has a romantic relationship with a female student as they work together on a growth experiment. He abandons her when their relationship no longer benefits him and she leans on an unethical college professor for support. The professor steals the growth experiment idea and sells it to a corporation that exploits it for profit. The experiment goes wrong and a 50-foot rampaging moose is the result.
See lessWhen a 50-foot-tall Maine moose destroys forests and attacks people, biologist Dan Gellerston must confront dark secrets from his past to find a way to stop the monster.
Thank you all for your very helpful feedback. I have included a bit more information if you would like to add additional comments. Dark secrets: jde notes that the phrase dark secrets is too vague and I agree. Richiev correctly guessed that it is the protagonists past affiliations that surface as heRead more
Thank you all for your very helpful feedback. I have included a bit more information if you would like to add additional comments.
Dark secrets: jde notes that the phrase dark secrets is too vague and I agree. Richiev correctly guessed that it is the protagonists past affiliations that surface as he tries to stop the creature. Jde you are also correct that he doesn’t willingly look into his past, it simply surfaces as a natural process during his investigation. Thank you, jde, for confirming my concerns about this phrase in the logline.
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I agree, an intriguing story idea--I just need to know what the "stakes" are that make getting to Vegas so important.
I agree, an intriguing story idea–I just need to know what the “stakes” are that make getting to Vegas so important.
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