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An alchemist in 18th Century France, the charismatic Count St Germain, becomes an immortal assassin in a tale of revenge, redemption and adventure.
I enjoyed the introduction of this character--an intriguing idea that left me wanting to know more. I was not able to understand what the movie would be about based on your description. If there was more information about why St. Germain is seeking revenge it would help to flesh out your logline. IRead more
I enjoyed the introduction of this character–an intriguing idea that left me wanting to know more. I was not able to understand what the movie would be about based on your description. If there was more information about why St. Germain is seeking revenge it would help to flesh out your logline. I am making the assumption that the redemption and adventure are unanticipated benefits of the character’s initial quest for revenge but if that is his motivation from the start I would like to know more about that as well. I hope you will make additional posts–I would enjoy hearing more of your ideas for this screenplay.
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Enjoyed your logline--the story possibilities unfold in my imagination even with this brief description. The only piece that is unclear is if the motivation for this story is internal or external to the main character. Does his struggle with personal relationships leave him vulnerable to being tormeRead more
Enjoyed your logline–the story possibilities unfold in my imagination even with this brief description. The only piece that is unclear is if the motivation for this story is internal or external to the main character. Does his struggle with personal relationships leave him vulnerable to being tormented, wooed and stalked or is this a normal, everyday pet psychiatrist who is being tormented, wooed and stalked by these women through no fault of his own and must defeat them to save his love life, career and sanity?
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Glad to see from your note below the title that you are planning this as an action/comedy. I agree with the previous comment that that would make the most sense for this movie. The irony in the story idea is a lot of fun. You have made a clear, concise statement with your logline. I wonder about theRead more
Glad to see from your note below the title that you are planning this as an action/comedy. I agree with the previous comment that that would make the most sense for this movie. The irony in the story idea is a lot of fun. You have made a clear, concise statement with your logline. I wonder about the word “amenable.” How does that progress your idea? What is it about this character that will need to change in order for him to be able to “fight” for his freedom? Is he meek? Is he hen-pecked? I think what interests me most is what happens when the young man has gone through whatever ordeals you have designed for him to fight for his freedom. Has he changed and realized he loves the bride after all? Do they get married? Obviously this is beyond the scope of a logline but I’m always excited when I read a logline and it makes me want to know more.
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