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Two rival gangsters team up to track down a cop, while one wants him dead, the other wants him alive.
Looks like a great idea. A agree with the previous comment, if there was at least a hint of each gangster's motivation it would feel like a more complete idea. I hope you will post a revised logline.
Looks like a great idea. A agree with the previous comment, if there was at least a hint of each gangster’s motivation it would feel like a more complete idea. I hope you will post a revised logline.
See lessTitle: Moose Crossing Logline: While investigating allegations of massive deforestation, John Bear, journalist, discovers a wealthy land owners? greed-driven attempt to speed up tree growth has accidentally created a new species–super-moose with an insatiable hunger for trees.
Great feedback, than you. I like the concise rewording and the additional character development of the reporter--a better character arc. The moose have a taste for humans instead of trees, whew, that ramps up the tension just a little. Thanks again for your feedback.
Great feedback, than you. I like the concise rewording and the additional character development of the reporter–a better character arc. The moose have a taste for humans instead of trees, whew, that ramps up the tension just a little. Thanks again for your feedback.
See lessWhen a brash college photographer sneaks into Vietnam to find her G.I. boyfriend and his squad in order to prove her worth, she then has to make it out of the jungle alone after she captures some incriminating photos.
Very interesting. I get the feeling that she sneaks into Vietnam as a somewhat foolish lark and then gets a lot more than she bargained for--is that what you were going for? I would like to know a bit more about your phase "to prove her worth." How does that play out in your story?
Very interesting. I get the feeling that she sneaks into Vietnam as a somewhat foolish lark and then gets a lot more than she bargained for–is that what you were going for? I would like to know a bit more about your phase “to prove her worth.” How does that play out in your story?
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