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When her husband dies, Jenny must block the unbearable pain of losing the man she loved with increasingly risky sexual adventures with a womanizer she hates.
Thanks so much for your comments. The genre is drama. I'll put together additional information in answer to your other questions in a second post.
Thanks so much for your comments. The genre is drama. I’ll put together additional information in answer to your other questions in a second post.
See lessDiane Perry the sickly daughter of an East End Fishmonger searches for perfection. She will find faith in the East, but only one Eastern monk will find faith in her.
Dear bec, Your logline captured my imagination--a journey from the East End to the Far East hooks me into your story. What is the inciting incident? What happened to your main character that was powerful enough to start her on this journey? Is it because she is "sickly"? Looking forward to learningRead more
Dear bec,
Your logline captured my imagination–a journey from the East End to the Far East hooks me into your story. What is the inciting incident? What happened to your main character that was powerful enough to start her on this journey? Is it because she is “sickly”? Looking forward to learning more about your logline.
See lessAfter publicly exposing his super-human abilities, an angel-hybrid teenager is hunted by his demonic half-brother who seeks to increase his power and enslave mankind.
Really enjoyed reading your logline. Who is the main character? I think it is the angel-hybrid teenager but it appears that the half brother is the one who has a strong motivation for action in your logline. Why would the half brother wait until the angel-hybrid publicly showed his powers to take acRead more
Really enjoyed reading your logline. Who is the main character? I think it is the angel-hybrid teenager but it appears that the half brother is the one who has a strong motivation for action in your logline. Why would the half brother wait until the angel-hybrid publicly showed his powers to take action? If they are related I would assume he already knew about his powers.
An angel-hybrid teenager must risk publicly exposing his powers to prevent his demonic half-brother from enslaving mandkind.
A quick idea for a revision.
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