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  1. Posted: May 20, 2013In: Public

    A disillusioned real estate developer vows to protect the residents of Almiiitey who believe they will be saved from his company?s plans for their future by a spirit from their past.

    almiiitey Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 26, 2013 at 12:08 pm

    Thank you for your comments Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat. I have actually written this screenplay and it does include many of your excellent suggestions. I hope that means I am moving in the right direction with the logline.

    Thank you for your comments Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat. I have actually written this screenplay and it does include many of your excellent suggestions. I hope that means I am moving in the right direction with the logline.

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  2. Posted: May 20, 2013In: Public

    A disillusioned real estate developer vows to protect the residents of Almiiitey who believe they will be saved from his company?s plans for their future by a spirit from their past.

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    Added an answer on May 26, 2013 at 2:03 am

    Maine has many small, isolated towns and the winters are long so there is a tradition of storytelling, including ghost stories. There is a legend from the 1800's about a famous man who gets a woman pregnant and abandons her. She dies in childbirth and vows revenge with her last dying breath. When thRead more

    Maine has many small, isolated towns and the winters are long so there is a tradition of storytelling, including ghost stories. There is a legend from the 1800’s about a famous man who gets a woman pregnant and abandons her. She dies in childbirth and vows revenge with her last dying breath. When the famous man dies, a dark mark appears on his tombstone in the seductive shape of a woman’s leg. The tombstone has been replaced many times and the mark always returns. My mother showed me the tombstone when I was a child. So, yes, I think it would be realistic to think a Maine town might have a legend about a past ancestor who will return to save the town in the future.

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  3. Posted: May 24, 2013In: Public

    An assassin hired by means of text messages to kill a prominent mobster discovers he has been set up by the daughter of one of his father?s hits in a complex scheme of revenge.

    almiiitey Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 26, 2013 at 1:49 am

    I'm interested in your pitch. What is X's scheme for revenge? What does Y have to do to save himself from this set up?

    I’m interested in your pitch. What is X’s scheme for revenge? What does Y have to do to save himself from this set up?

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