Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
Afraid of what the acrid city air might be doing to their unborn child, a man and his young wife retreat to the countryside to spend a weekend on a camping break. Faced with the unbearable beauty of what the city had left of the countryside while mourning the loss of his own innocence, the man crumbles under the pressures of his impending fatherhood and submits to a violent, emotional regression in the hopes of appealing to the maternity of nature.
I'm intrigued by your logline. What is the main character's goal? What is preventing him from reaching this goal? What, specifically, does the young father do when he has a "violent, emotional regression?"
I’m intrigued by your logline. What is the main character’s goal? What is preventing him from reaching this goal? What, specifically, does the young father do when he has a “violent, emotional regression?”
See lessA disillusioned real estate developer vows to protect the residents of Almiiitey who believe they will be saved from his company?s plans for their future by a spirit from their past.
Hello Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat. The story takes place in Maine, USA and is much a culture clash between big city business and what we refer to as "local" people. Yes, you're right, it is a conflict between the main character and his employer. I revised the logline and would welcome your comments. ThankRead more
Hello Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat. The story takes place in Maine, USA and is much a culture clash between big city business and what we refer to as “local” people. Yes, you’re right, it is a conflict between the main character and his employer. I revised the logline and would welcome your comments. Thanks so much for your help.
See lessA disillusioned real estate developer vows to protect the residents of Almiiitey who believe they will be saved from his company?s plans for their future by a spirit from their past.
Thanks so much for your comment, Callum.S. This is a complex story and trying to squeeze it into 25 words is a very interesting exercise. I have revised the logline to, hopefully, clarify the goal. I would welcome your comments. An attorney defends local residents against his own firm when he suspecRead more
Thanks so much for your comment, Callum.S. This is a complex story and trying to squeeze it into 25 words is a very interesting exercise. I have revised the logline to, hopefully, clarify the goal. I would welcome your comments.
An attorney defends local residents against his own firm when he suspects it sanctioned murder to force a real estate development deal on the town.
See less