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  1. Posted: February 26, 2013In: Public

    A renowned FBI agent must stop the world's most powerful man before he brings the planet to the brink of environmental destruction.

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    Added an answer on February 26, 2013 at 9:58 pm

    What makes the world's most powerful man the world's most powerful man? Is he intellectually powerful? Is he physically powerful? Combination? Does the hero have a flaw which could make it extremely difficult for him to defeat the world's most powerful man?

    What makes the world’s most powerful man the world’s most powerful man? Is he intellectually powerful? Is he physically powerful? Combination? Does the hero have a flaw which could make it extremely difficult for him to defeat the world’s most powerful man?

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  2. Posted: February 26, 2013In: Public

    Wanting to right his ancestors wrongdoings during the slave-trade era, a youngboy struggles to attain peace as he unwittingly rekindles an age long war.

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    Added an answer on February 26, 2013 at 9:56 pm

    It sounds like the young boy starts the conflict (inciting incident) and ends the war (goal). Is this correct?

    It sounds like the young boy starts the conflict (inciting incident) and ends the war (goal). Is this correct?

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  3. Posted: February 26, 2013In: Public

    After his wife is killed by a rival street gang, a reformed criminal follows his dreams to teach music. But when a school shooting forces lockdown, he must protect a disabled protege.

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    My understanding of protege is completely different. My guess is that within the context of the story the "protege" would be a music student/apprentice/pupil. Is there something particularly special about this protege? Is he/she carrying anything special? Is he/she being protected because they're diRead more

    My understanding of protege is completely different. My guess is that within the context of the story the “protege” would be a music student/apprentice/pupil. Is there something particularly special about this protege? Is he/she carrying anything special? Is he/she being protected because they’re disabled?

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