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2366: Earth is on the verge of collapse and the wealthy Convert themselves into android bodies for life extension to travel to New Earth, 103 years away. When Conversion for a corrupt detective finds him malfunctioning on a garbage tip and his family nowhere in sight he has three days to repair his body, find his family and get on the ship to New Earth before it leaves.
Thanks for your feedback Nick. I'm going to have to have a think about this and rework it.
Thanks for your feedback Nick. I’m going to have to have a think about this and rework it.
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Thanks for the feedback Nick. Really appreciate it! You were spot on with the protagonist (corrupt detective) and the inciting incident (waking up on trash tip) however the goals are to repair the malfunctioning body (before he completely breaks down), find the family and get on the ship before it tRead more
Thanks for the feedback Nick. Really appreciate it! You were spot on with the protagonist (corrupt detective) and the inciting incident (waking up on trash tip) however the goals are to repair the malfunctioning body (before he completely breaks down), find the family and get on the ship before it takes off in three days.
My logline is indeed a mess. So here is another attempt, hope this is clearer:
When a corrupt detective awakens in the body of a malfunctioning android, he has three days to repair the body, find his family and board the last voyage to New Earth.
See less2366: Earth is on the verge of collapse and the wealthy Convert themselves into android bodies for life extension to travel to New Earth, 103 years away. When Conversion for a corrupt detective finds him malfunctioning on a garbage tip and his family nowhere in sight he has three days to repair his body, find his family and get on the ship to New Earth before it leaves.
The corrupt detective is the protagonist.
The corrupt detective is the protagonist.
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