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  1. Posted: June 20, 2013In: Public

    Sex , psychism and cigarettes. Oh my. A small town, southern girl migrates to the big city where she meets two professional women and begins a ritual of food, friendship, and betrayal; but when sudden memories of her past arise, she struggles to decide the best path to redemption.

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on June 20, 2013 at 9:51 am

    Hi What's the i.i that spurs on the change/journey? (Inner and outer conflicts come across very vague. Give us details) "A woman"...that can be anyone. Give us some characteristics, what's her occupation, her flaws, goals, an Antagonist/obstacles etc.

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    What’s the i.i that spurs on the change/journey? (Inner and outer conflicts come across very vague. Give us details)
    “A woman”…that can be anyone. Give us some characteristics, what’s her occupation, her flaws, goals, an Antagonist/obstacles etc.

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  2. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    Unfaithful man tries to enamor again his wife, who loses her memory in an accident while driving to the divorce case.

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    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 9:18 pm

    Nicely done.

    Nicely done.

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    During WW2, team of monsters led by Annabell Van Helsing must stop a group of Occult Nazis from resurrecting Dracula.

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    Added an answer on April 16, 2013 at 2:43 pm

    (has a "league of extraordinary gentlemen" feel to it) Names and age are usually irrelevant in loglines. I'm in two minds about mentioning the name as not many people will be privy to the relationship between the name "Van Helsing and Dracula". But in saying that, it is relevant to the story. What iRead more

    (has a “league of extraordinary gentlemen” feel to it)

    Names and age are usually irrelevant in loglines. I’m in two minds about mentioning the name as not many people will be privy to the relationship between the name “Van Helsing and Dracula”.
    But in saying that, it is relevant to the story.

    What is the protagonist flaw? (a personal obstacle to over come? The weight of Van Helsing name?
    Is she a monster herself?

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