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An emotionally stunted musician hits the road with an aspiring producer in order to track down the woman who has been the subject of all his work since she broke his heart in high school.
I can see the idea...but What is the musician goal? Is it to win her over? Is it to gloat how successful he is? To get closure? The logline doesn't clearly show what his goal is. Is she the Antagonist? Is tracking her location the only obstacle to overcome?
I can see the idea…but What is the musician goal? Is it to win her over? Is it to gloat how successful he is? To get closure?
See lessThe logline doesn’t clearly show what his goal is.
Is she the Antagonist? Is tracking her location the only obstacle to overcome?
When a timid janitor?s fiance is kidnapped by a fire demon, he must locate a mythical artifact and uncover its power before the devil kills his lover and unborn child
Honestly, it's just a logline at this stage. I'll be writing a beat sheet soon and progress from there. Once I have completed a draft etc I will contact Karel or the Shark-man to help me iron out the kinks. Months away, plenty of time to focus on the story and character arc. Cheers for all the help.
Honestly, it’s just a logline at this stage. I’ll be writing a beat sheet soon and progress from there. Once I have completed a draft etc I will contact Karel or the Shark-man to help me iron out the kinks. Months away, plenty of time to focus on the story and character arc. Cheers for all the help.
See lessWhen a timid janitor?s fiance is kidnapped by a fire demon, he must locate a mythical artifact and uncover its power before the devil kills his lover and unborn child
Thank-you
Thank-you
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