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When a Fire-Demon from his parents past kidnaps his fianc?, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artefact and uncover its power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child.
Still doesn't seem right... The Demon is from his past (killed his parents) When a Fire-Demon kidnaps his fiance, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artifact and uncover it's power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child. When a timid hydrologist's fiance is kidnapped and held ransRead more
Still doesn’t seem right…
The Demon is from his past (killed his parents)
When a Fire-Demon kidnaps his fiance, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artifact and uncover it’s power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child.
When a timid hydrologist’s fiance is kidnapped and held ransom, he must locate a mythical artifact and uncover it’s power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child.
any suggestions?
See lessWhen a Fire-Demon from his parents past kidnaps his fianc?, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artefact and uncover its power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child.
Revised: "When a Fire-Demon from his past kidnaps his fianc?, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artefact and uncover its power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child
Revised:
“When a Fire-Demon from his past kidnaps his fianc?, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artefact and uncover its power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child
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The more I think on this the more I don't like it... The protagonist needs a flaw or something he needs to overcome. Goals,obstacles and antagonist aren't shown the hook isn't strong enough... wish I could delete this logline.
The more I think on this the more I don’t like it…
The protagonist needs a flaw or something he needs to overcome.
Goals,obstacles and antagonist aren’t shown
the hook isn’t strong enough…
wish I could delete this logline.
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