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When a lost young man's mind is filled with memories of fallen heroes, he races against a dark mystic to find a powerful ancient relic that can save the realm or plunge it into darkness.
Thanks for the info. I do feel I've got a good twist on a hero's morality and a some other stuff in this story to make it stand out. He wants the relic to rid his mind of the memories but the mystic wants to relic for power... in the log line I chose to show the stakes and ended up sacrificing the cRead more
Thanks for the info. I do feel I’ve got a good twist on a hero’s morality and a some other stuff in this story to make it stand out.
He wants the relic to rid his mind of the memories but the mystic wants to relic for power… in the log line I chose to show the stakes and ended up sacrificing the connection to the catalyst on accident. I’ll try again..
“After a young wanderer’s mind is filled with memories of forgotten heroes, he races against a dark mystic to find an ancient relic that has the power to restore his sanity.”
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"Never give up, Never surrender!" I just finished the outline for the screenplay and I"m very happy with it.. so making sure I get the logline perfect is important. Thanks for all the feedback. I'm still racking my brain for the easiest way to describe my main character. I have though about saying eRead more
“Never give up, Never surrender!”
I just finished the outline for the screenplay and I”m very happy with it.. so making sure I get the logline perfect is important. Thanks for all the feedback.
I’m still racking my brain for the easiest way to describe my main character. I have though about saying eagle-human hybrid even though that’s not completely accurate in the story, it would serve for the logline. I also keep coming back to wanting to point out that he’s a soldier or operative… but it’s hard without becoming too complex.
It would have been easier if i had made the MC a vampire or werewolf… but I’ll keep trying..
“Working for a secret monster society, a driven operative fights through a horde of zombies to secure the one thing that could return his family’s honor, a cure. “
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As always, thanks for the help! His vision of redemption is getting back into heaven. The character arc is that he realizes that becoming human IS his redemption, it just takes the events of the story for him to see that. "A fast-talking drifter recruits a supernatural team to help him steal PandoraRead more
As always, thanks for the help!
His vision of redemption is getting back into heaven. The character arc is that he realizes that becoming human IS his redemption, it just takes the events of the story for him to see that.
“A fast-talking drifter recruits a supernatural team to help him steal Pandora’s Box from Lucifer, in the hope of being reinstated as heaven’s Angel of Darkness.”
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