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  1. Posted: February 27, 2013In: Public

    When a colonisation crew of four escaping a threatened earth, awakens by ship failure, a useless artist must save the mission and mankind from a captain, incorrectly believing one of them isn?t human.

    bondthewriter Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 1, 2013 at 2:05 am

    I think you've got a great start, just keep working at it and you'll get it. My suggestion would be to be careful not to confuse your backstory with your story. I'm guilty of this a lot as well. Just keep in mind the story is about your main character, not the world in which they exist.

    I think you’ve got a great start, just keep working at it and you’ll get it. My suggestion would be to be careful not to confuse your backstory with your story. I’m guilty of this a lot as well. Just keep in mind the story is about your main character, not the world in which they exist.

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  2. Posted: February 28, 2013In: Public

    After waking up human, the former Angel of Darkness recruits a supernatural team to steal Pandora's Box from Lucifer.

    bondthewriter Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 1, 2013 at 1:34 am

    Thanks everyone! How about.. "After waking up human, the former Angel of Darkness struggles for redemption by recruiting a supernatural team to steal Pandora's Box from Lucifer."

    Thanks everyone!

    How about..
    “After waking up human, the former Angel of Darkness struggles for redemption by recruiting a supernatural team to steal Pandora’s Box from Lucifer.”

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  3. Posted: February 28, 2013In: Public

    In a world with real monsters, a desperate griffin and his team fight through the expanding zombie horde to deliver an immune human to their superiors.

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    Added an answer on March 1, 2013 at 1:20 am

    Yeah, this logline has been kicking my ass. The monsters eat humans... they have a ruling Council.. 'The Council of Blood'.. the Griffins are enforces for the council but they are the only species that isn't addicted to Human blood.. The MC's family line has been known to disobey orders so with thisRead more

    Yeah, this logline has been kicking my ass. The monsters eat humans… they have a ruling Council.. ‘The Council of Blood’.. the Griffins are enforces for the council but they are the only species that isn’t addicted to Human blood.. The MC’s family line has been known to disobey orders so with this Zombie problem he is actually given a chance to serve on a strike force and he sees it as his chance to prove his loyalty to the council. The conflict is really about doing evil when you’re ‘just following orders’.
    As a side note… the zombie infection is based on the monster’s addiction to human blood, just amplified and mutated to the 1000th degree.

    So.. with all that said…
    “Zombies flood NYC, giving a desperate griffin soldier the opportunity to prove his loyalty to his rulers by fighting through the zombies to deliver an immune human to a secure lab.”

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