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A survivalist is forced to defend his post-apocalypse community from anti-technology fanatics and a traitor within the community's leadership.
The day that your story starts.. what is different? What is the inciting incident? Do the AT people attack for the first time? You need a reason for the story and then I agree with Timmyelliot, your MC needs a specific goal. Try not to use Forced.. always better with the MC chooses to go on the 'jouRead more
The day that your story starts.. what is different? What is the inciting incident? Do the AT people attack for the first time? You need a reason for the story and then I agree with Timmyelliot, your MC needs a specific goal. Try not to use Forced.. always better with the MC chooses to go on the ‘journey’. There is always a choice, even if the other choice is death, it’s still a choice.
See lessGood luck, sounds like an awesome idea.
When team of zombie fighting monsters lose their commander an overzealous commando orders them to protect a solitary human that could save their food source from extinction.
Thanks!
Thanks!
See lessWhen team of zombie fighting monsters lose their commander an overzealous commando orders them to protect a solitary human that could save their food source from extinction.
Yeah, maybe I'll change it to ' could save the monster's food source' The human is unique, holds the link to a cure in her blood.
Yeah, maybe I’ll change it to ‘ could save the monster’s food source’
The human is unique, holds the link to a cure in her blood.
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