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After an estranged middle-aged son loses his mother to a fatal accident, he embarks on a mission to spread her ashes, with his “slow” step-brother in tow, against the family’s wishes.
Thanks! You seem to have the right idea already. Prior to her passing, he basically cut ties with the whole family (including mama) because he thinks 1) step-dad catfished mama, 2) sister went along with it or was indifferent to it, 3) step-bro is "too stupid" to know any better, and 4) mama won't lRead more
Thanks!
You seem to have the right idea already. Prior to her passing, he basically cut ties with the whole family (including mama) because he thinks 1) step-dad catfished mama, 2) sister went along with it or was indifferent to it, 3) step-bro is “too stupid” to know any better, and 4) mama won’t listen to reason.
Would it help if I amend it to “beloved mother”? Nah, I’m not sure about that.
Also, he’s “estranged” from his daughter because his wife took her to live with her parents (his in-laws) when she left him. “Estranged,” in this case, seemed a bit strong for the synopsis, but I was trying to keep it tight. That’s my bad.
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The Antarctic Tundra?--?There's not much of an antarctic tundra to speak of, but it's not accurate to say there is none. The point, however, is that there is probably a more accurate word to use.
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The point, however, is that there is probably a more accurate word to use.
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Definitely an attention-grabber.
These guys make some excellent points and observations.
I hope you follow through and write this story. It has a lot of potential.
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