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  1. Posted: June 19, 2016In: Fantasy

    After trapping himself in an alternate universe, a Mage and his split consciousness must commune with the common realm to defeat the dark forces that threaten their existence.

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    Added an answer on June 23, 2016 at 7:45 am

    In a race against time, a wizard, trapped in an alternate dimension, must train two in his place to defeat a wicked king hell-bent on amassing an inter-dimensional army. (31 words).

    In a race against time, a wizard, trapped in an alternate dimension, must train two in his place to defeat a wicked king hell-bent on amassing an inter-dimensional army.

    (31 words).

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  2. Posted: June 19, 2016In: Comedy

    After a successful suicide attempt, the spirit of a failed actor joins forces with a mediocre comedian to create a Tony-worthy Broadway production.

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    Added an answer on June 20, 2016 at 11:24 am

    After a successful suicide attempt, the spirit of a failed actor risks his immortal soul in a wager with Death over the success of a brand new Broadway production.

    After a successful suicide attempt, the spirit of a failed actor risks his immortal soul in a wager with Death over the success of a brand new Broadway production.

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  3. Posted: June 19, 2016In: Fantasy

    Two teenagers in a coma meet in a transition state in the afterlife and discover they?re soulmates with a decision to make on whether or not to return to their prior lives.

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    Added an answer on June 20, 2016 at 2:38 am

    Very neat idea. Feels a bit wordy. Would it work for your story to clarify one of the teens as the MC? I don't know your story like you do, but could something like this work? When a teen falls into a coma and meets her soulmate, she must convince him to fight for his life or choose between her ownRead more

    Very neat idea.
    Feels a bit wordy.

    Would it work for your story to clarify one of the teens as the MC?
    I don’t know your story like you do, but could something like this work?

    When a teen falls into a coma and meets her soulmate, she must convince him to fight for his life or choose between her own life and following him into the light.

    Mine is too wordy, as well, but I hope it helps.

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