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A schizophrenic ex-serviceman wants to revenge his imaginary wife and her lover!
When I read your original logline I thought it was a comedy. If you want there to be a big reveal, perhaps try something like this: Cuckolded, an ex-serviceman seeks revenge on his wife and her lover only to discover the impossibility of the task.
When I read your original logline I thought it was a comedy.
If you want there to be a big reveal, perhaps try something like this:
Cuckolded, an ex-serviceman seeks revenge on his wife and her lover only to discover the impossibility of the task.
See lessPressured into attending a frat party, an introverted college student must face-off with an aggressive frat boy to save herself from becoming a rape victim.
Before coming to this site, this was my logline for this short: A brainy college Sophomore, attending her first Frat party, must follow her instincts in order to save herself from a dangerous predator. 22 Words.
Before coming to this site, this was my logline for this short:
A brainy college Sophomore, attending her first Frat party, must follow her instincts in order to save herself from a dangerous predator.
22 Words.
See lessPressured into attending a frat party, an introverted college student must face-off with an aggressive frat boy to save herself from becoming a rape victim.
This is a 10 minute short I wrote for a screenplay competition back in 2013. Took second place. After a couple re-writes I started submitting to other competitions (won't learn the results for a few more months). Then came the relatively recent news reports. You'll notice there's no mention of the rRead more
This is a 10 minute short I wrote for a screenplay competition back in 2013. Took second place. After a couple re-writes I started submitting to other competitions (won’t learn the results for a few more months). Then came the relatively recent news reports.
You’ll notice there’s no mention of the rape taking place. It’s sort of a cautionary tale in doing all you can to avoid the situation, but knowing how to defend yourself when the situation can’t be avoided.
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