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A young artist struggles with her newfound spiritual powers after being visited by the angel of prophetic revelation.
Is the challenge here is for the young woman to learn how to deal with her powers or will her powers be in support of a revelation? In short, why was she given "spiritual" powers? Your story definitely will be a good one. Just a few modifications for clarity on the logline.
Is the challenge here is for the young woman to learn how to deal with her powers or will her powers be in support of a revelation? In short, why was she given “spiritual” powers?
Your story definitely will be a good one. Just a few modifications for clarity on the logline.
See lessA devoted wife suspecting infidelity poisons her children to hurt her husband and now she must right her wrong and conceal the truth when she later realizes her mistake.
It could be just a misunderstanding on my part. When you identify that she poisons her children and then must right her wrong for me, I found it hard to be able to reverse what I would expect to be a lethal poisoning unless she is unskilled in field in medicine. Concealing the truth about her actionRead more
It could be just a misunderstanding on my part. When you identify that she poisons her children and then must right her wrong for me, I found it hard to be able to reverse what I would expect to be a lethal poisoning unless she is unskilled in field in medicine. Concealing the truth about her actions….the “how” will truly be a mystery and stir intrigue. Hope this helps.
See lessExpecting a big extortion payoff, an esteemed detective's last case forces him to protect his extortion partners and save his reputation.
I was hoping it would be clear that the detective was involved with the crime. After a few rewrites, I thought I had nailed it but will investigate an better approach. I was hoping identifying him as esteemed it would give way to the importance of saving face.
I was hoping it would be clear that the detective was involved with the crime. After a few rewrites, I thought I had nailed it but will investigate an better approach. I was hoping identifying him as esteemed it would give way to the importance of saving face.
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