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  1. Posted: August 4, 2013In: Student Loglines

    A young boy living in Australia try's to earn some Money by selling paper's just so he can support his Family

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    Added an answer on August 5, 2013 at 1:42 pm

    Hey Mat, I guess there's something missing like that 'pow', kick people in the face with your ideas. Good things to remember, picking it up from Karel's writing class are these, especially for loglines. 1. Character 2. Inciting Incident 3. Goal 4. Obstacles 5. Stages 6. Antagonist God bless and seeRead more

    Hey Mat, I guess there’s something missing like that ‘pow’, kick people in the face with your ideas. Good things to remember, picking it up from Karel’s writing class are these, especially for loglines.

    1. Character
    2. Inciting Incident
    3. Goal
    4. Obstacles
    5. Stages
    6. Antagonist

    God bless and see you at school tomorrow!

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2013In: Public

    When a twenties something Jersey Shore type who lives solely for “the life” comes down with a bout of severe depression, he begins to see his world in a different light.

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    Added an answer on August 5, 2013 at 1:28 pm

    Cheers. Concerning shorts, is it always necessary to have an antagonist role in there because I don't think that is clear cut and that role could go to his circle of friends/former life he lives before he transforms into an introverted, deep, poem-spouting, sad sack. The goal to me is on the charactRead more

    Cheers.

    Concerning shorts, is it always necessary to have an antagonist role in there because I don’t think that is clear cut and that role could go to his circle of friends/former life he lives before he transforms into an introverted, deep, poem-spouting, sad sack.

    The goal to me is on the character trying to find what true happiness really is.

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2013In: Public

    When an earnest, hardworking nineteen year old unknowingly sets up the murder of a childhood friend gone astray, he unwittingly becomes entangled in the unglamorous world of low-level organized crime.

    Caleb Tumanako Logliner
    Added an answer on August 5, 2013 at 1:17 pm

    Thanks Nicolas but I'm a bit confused about "all you've given us is a logline" when this is all it intended to be. Was there anything here that would have liked to have added perhaps concerning the structure of it? Cheers.

    Thanks Nicolas but I’m a bit confused about “all you’ve given us is a logline” when this is all it intended to be. Was there anything here that would have liked to have added perhaps concerning the structure of it?

    Cheers.

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