Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • About
  • Questions
  • Answers
  • Best Answers
  1. Posted: August 8, 2013In: Public

    When a tough, beloved gay uncle of a large Maori family starts dressing in drag, he is met with opposition from his family, the town and a notorious Maori gang who everyone wants to get rid of.

    Caleb Tumanako Logliner
    Added an answer on August 8, 2013 at 7:20 pm

    That length, trying to jam in everything. I think a skilled writer is one who can get everything in - without going overboard. Cheers Axel. God bless, mate.

    That length, trying to jam in everything. I think a skilled writer is one who can get everything in – without going overboard.

    Cheers Axel.

    God bless, mate.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  2. Posted: August 7, 2013In: Public

    Four teenage urban explorers must walk six miles through the dangerous ruins of Detroit to reach a pay phone after getting robbed in the city?s abandoned underbelly.

    Caleb Tumanako Logliner
    Added an answer on August 7, 2013 at 5:47 pm

    The only criticism I have is the use of the word - underbelly. Usually, that is to describe more about the bad side of society rather than an actual place so could it be... Four teenage urban explorers must walk six miles through the dangerous ruins of Detroit to reach a pay phone after getting robbRead more

    The only criticism I have is the use of the word – underbelly. Usually, that is to describe more about the bad side of society rather than an actual place so could it be…

    Four teenage urban explorers must walk six miles through the dangerous ruins of Detroit to reach a pay phone after getting robbed in the city?s former red light district.

    ?

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  3. Posted: August 5, 2013In: Public

    When a dysfunctional youth bashes a man on a Sydney beach making away with the victim’s handheld digital camcorder, the youth starts filming a day out in his life until his troubled past begins catching up with him all on camera.

    Caleb Tumanako Logliner
    Added an answer on August 6, 2013 at 11:31 pm

    It does infact all happen to the youth while he is filming! Well, last time I checked the script. It's a forgiveness tale which I wanted to include in the logline but decided to just talk about the action/events. Thank you for your suggestions, helpful!

    It does infact all happen to the youth while he is filming! Well, last time I checked the script. It’s a forgiveness tale which I wanted to include in the logline but decided to just talk about the action/events.

    Thank you for your suggestions, helpful!

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
1 … 7 8 9 10 11 … 13

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 7,997
  • Reviews 32,189
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,710

screenwriting courses

Adv 120x600

aalan

Explore

  • Signup

Footer

© 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.