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When the world’s economic system collapses causing great social upheaval, a rising political savior steps in with a new economic idea where all economy is stored inside the human body, beginning the formation of a powerful Governmental global revolution and resulting in one of the greatest tribulation periods of all time.
The logline alludes to that with the last line, though not in a conventional way with the tribulation period resulting in natural protagonists being born out of the inciting incident (political figure implementing a new system which is against their beliefs), with the stakes being the fate of the woRead more
The logline alludes to that with the last line, though not in a conventional way with the tribulation period resulting in natural protagonists being born out of the inciting incident (political figure implementing a new system which is against their beliefs), with the stakes being the fate of the world at hand. If it is not that clear than perhaps it is either the wording or I have to be more concise and have more clarity.
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See lessWhen the world’s economic system collapses causing great social upheaval, a rising political savior steps in with a new economic idea where all economy is stored inside the human body, beginning the formation of a powerful Governmental global revolution and resulting in one of the greatest tribulation periods of all time.
The political savior is the antagonist, the way the logline is worded - it's meant to give you a look at the rise of this political genius, believing he is a good guy then watching him turn and becoming an evil dictator on a global scale so it's a character transformation over time. The protagonistsRead more
The political savior is the antagonist, the way the logline is worded – it’s meant to give you a look at the rise of this political genius, believing he is a good guy then watching him turn and becoming an evil dictator on a global scale so it’s a character transformation over time. The protagonists are survivors or those who refuse his system. His goal is to unite the world after the whole world’s economy collapses on itself but it’s really to rule the world etc.
See lessWhen the world’s economic system collapses causing great social upheaval, a rising political savior steps in with a new economic idea where all economy is stored inside the human body, beginning the formation of a powerful Governmental global revolution and resulting in one of the greatest tribulation periods of all time.
Always had this idea and would like to flesh out the story a bit more, the logline is probably a bit wordy but I like to get the hook in there. The political savior is actually the antichrist from the Scriptures and the basis of this story is straight from the Book of Revelation about a mark which eRead more
Always had this idea and would like to flesh out the story a bit more, the logline is probably a bit wordy but I like to get the hook in there.
The political savior is actually the antichrist from the Scriptures and the basis of this story is straight from the Book of Revelation about a mark which everyone receives on their right hand and forehead to buy and sell which is just a modern take on it.
Have to get a good grip on the story though, probably put it away and begin just writing.
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