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When an earnest, hardworking nineteen year old unknowingly sets up the murder of a childhood friend gone astray, he unwittingly becomes entangled in the unglamorous world of low-level organized crime.
Ah no worries! I guess I just don't want it to be too wordy because I know I can keep going on and on and on so it seems that I'm good at set ups as everyone has told me! I just have to finish through with the driving points, the goals, the obstacles and the antagonist. Feel like I'm getting there aRead more
Ah no worries!
I guess I just don’t want it to be too wordy because I know I can keep going on and on and on so it seems that I’m good at set ups as everyone has told me! I just have to finish through with the driving points, the goals, the obstacles and the antagonist.
Feel like I’m getting there and the feedback I’ve been getting is shaping my loglines greatly.
Cheers and God bless, bud!
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I can get into detail with that so why not. His former life becomes more revealed to him as being vapid, shallow and empty. He starts to question this and the world around him through poetry! Starts remembering his times as a child, care free and what has basically lead him to all the partying! He bRead more
I can get into detail with that so why not.
His former life becomes more revealed to him as being vapid, shallow and empty. He starts to question this and the world around him through poetry! Starts remembering his times as a child, care free and what has basically lead him to all the partying! He begins to enjoy things like nature! Trees! Rainbows and the sun! Eventually, as he starts to make progress by coming out of his delusional partying life style… He’s offered something like free tanning salon passes or a year long V.I.P pass to an exclusive night club, causing him to quickly return to his former ways.
Now I guess what I want to do with that idea is to get a solid story out of it. So I’ll go back to basics and most likely work on the goal and the antagonist roles so it’s more structured and not something for the recycle bin.
Cheers.
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Cheers Nicholas!
Cheers Nicholas!
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