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  1. Posted: January 3, 2018In: Crime

    A guy walks in a bar to find himself in the middle of a heist.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 3, 2018 at 1:35 pm

    heist in a bar? now that's a joke

    heist in a bar?
    now that’s a joke

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  2. Posted: December 31, 2017In: Fantasy

    possible fiction-thriller “the quarry” (MITH)

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 31, 2017 at 6:38 pm

    you're quite right Richiev and I apologise for not mentioning it earlier but the manager has recently joined the operations. some accidents were reported which he reckons to be normal but then a pattern emerges Stakes are raised when he tracks down unsolved case of...the previous manager! you know hRead more

    you’re quite right Richiev

    and I apologise for not mentioning it earlier but the manager has recently joined the operations.
    some accidents were reported which he reckons to be normal
    but then a pattern emerges
    Stakes are raised when he tracks down unsolved case of…the previous manager!

    you know how a MITH genre has:
    1) the Monster: the alien authorities
    2) the House: unsolved case of the previous manager holds him back from daring to leave, creating a house
    &
    3) the Sin: __________(that’s where I am confused)

    could it be better if I don’t put it into MITH
    instead deal with it as a sci-fi thriller

    If only i had “the sin”…

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  3. Posted: December 29, 2017In: Drama

    possible rites of passage “the masterpiece”

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 30, 2017 at 3:21 am

    just like "hayao miyazaki" this is his final film he cannot afford to regret he never made what he really wanted to All his life he made films for the audience but now when he tries to make one for his inner peace, he is in direct conflict with his only kindred spirit (trying to sabotage his projectRead more

    just like “hayao miyazaki” this is his final film
    he cannot afford to regret he never made what he really wanted to

    All his life he made films for the audience but now when he tries to make one for his inner peace, he is in direct conflict with his only kindred spirit (trying to sabotage his project critiquing painful true details)
    when he discovers this, he chooses his film over his friend (excruciatingly painful for him which he suffers throughout this journey)

    Therefore “a course dramatic action that results from the rupture” would be him making his film regardless and discovering the painful truth, that he lived a life full of lies..

    so they sip coffee as the sun sets,
    an event proof that there is no bigger truth than a kindred spirit, not even your masterpiece..

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