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when a women recived text from her child passed away ten years ago ,she try to fined him to prove it is not illusion
After receiving a text from her child, ten years after his death...[[a woman tries to find him/ her, to prove its not an illusion]] for the part in brackets.. she wouldn't find her child just to prove her sanity, but because it's her child! Also the plot-verb resembles that one of a 2008 Eastwood fiRead more
After receiving a text from her child, ten years after his death…[[a woman tries to find him/ her, to prove its not an illusion]]
for the part in brackets..
she wouldn’t find her child just to prove her sanity, but because it’s her child!
Also the plot-verb resembles that one of a 2008 Eastwood film “changeling”
Also, what’s stopping her?
and if it is her child..why doesn’t (s)he just drop by-instead of texting her?
If it isn’t, you should find a way around “text from her child” in the logline..
“what’s stopping her…” MUST be a part of your logline..
See lessafter a bizarre experience in his lawn, a know-it-all businessman seeks out the-indian-guru-next-door to-instead-find himself in the drug business with a hippie
a slightly better take II.."After a topgun determines to get high for the first time, he find himself in a contract to manage a pot business, two days before his own media firm is to partner up with the DEA against the same issue"
a slightly better take II..
“After a topgun determines to get high for the first time, he find himself in a contract to manage a pot business, two days before his own media firm is to partner up with the DEA against the same issue”
See lessAfter his father’s second marriage, a teenage boy learns to navigate his new life, only to discover his stepmom’s a narcissist..
what's his specific, visual, objective goal? (could be some event he's looking forward to while his new mom acts as the force of conflict..) at this stage, the plot looks a little biased, shouldn't it also reveal the other faces of the dice? (If you still choose to go with an evil-stepmom premise, yRead more
what’s his specific, visual, objective goal?
(could be some event he’s looking forward to while his new mom acts as the force of conflict..)
at this stage, the plot looks a little biased,
shouldn’t it also reveal the other faces of the dice?
(If you still choose to go with an evil-stepmom premise, you might wanna exercise your freedom in a comedy instead, otherwise it would hurt good stepmoms trying their best to hold their families together)
…then walk away like “team america world police”
See less(full of clich?s and yet a superb film structure)