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A loyal husband and his wife have a double date with their two best friends. All goes well until the husband’s strong romantic feelings for his best friends’ girlfriend, who happens to be his ex, show up in the middle of the date. TITLE: Double Trouble
"When his feelings for an ex resurfaces on a double date..." Still why would anybody double date their Ex if their history had the potential of resurfacing? "After being forced by his wife to double date an Ex, his feelings for her reappear..." But you risk a passive protagonist with this version, sRead more
“When his feelings for an ex resurfaces on a double date…”
Still why would anybody double date their Ex if their history had the potential of resurfacing?
“After being forced by his wife to double date an Ex, his feelings for her reappear…”
But you risk a passive protagonist with this version, since he is dragged in Act II by his wife
I get a feeling that you kinda get the logline formula..
I’d suggest you post more loglines to see how it goes
Don’t go missing mrmmr
If you don’t believe me, read the crappy loglines most logliners posted in the beginning of their journey here
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A loyal husband and his wife have a double date with their two best friends. All goes well until the husband’s strong romantic feelings for his best friends’ girlfriend, who happens to be his ex, show up in the middle of the date. TITLE: Double Trouble
>>>A loyal husband and his wife If he's "loyal", he cannot have "strong romantic feelings" in the middle of their double date. Also, what happens as a result of this inciting incident? You need a goal for your protagonist--which reminds me--who is your protagonist?
>>>A loyal husband and his wife
If he’s “loyal”, he cannot have “strong romantic feelings” in the middle of their double date.
Also, what happens as a result of this inciting incident?
See lessYou need a goal for your protagonist–which reminds me–who is your protagonist?
When a fragile single girl wins a holiday vacation at 28, she has 3 weeks to go into a meaningful relationship or risk relapsing into depression
my take:After winning a "couple's ticket to heaven", a depressed bachelorette has 3 weeks before the cruise, to make it work with one of her exes or face relapse.
my take:
After winning a “couple’s ticket to heaven”, a depressed bachelorette has 3 weeks before the cruise, to make it work with one of her exes or face relapse.
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