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A self-centered, up-and-coming actor is about to have his once-in-a-lifetime ?big break? meeting with a control-freak star-director but his neurotic casual-girlfriend reveals that she?s pregnant, unplanned, certain he?s the father, potentially bringing everything he?s worked for crashing down, causing him to morally juggle his priorities.
What's his North? This version is far clear than your previous attempt but in 54 words, you still missed his goal. You need to spell out what it means to "morally juggle priorities" to provide him that North.
What’s his North?
This version is far clear than your previous attempt but in 54 words, you still missed his goal.
You need to spell out what it means to “morally juggle priorities” to provide him that North.
See lessLogline: A total womanizer transforms his female best friend from clinger to player, finds himself attracted to his new creation but has taught her a little too well.
Your premise has a great comic potential! My take: To get rid of his needy female friend, a womaniser conducts his infamous "flirting masterclass" all too well, only to fall in love with her Is it for a short or full length feature?
Your premise has a great comic potential!
My take:
To get rid of his needy female friend, a womaniser conducts his infamous “flirting masterclass” all too well, only to fall in love with her
Is it for a short or full length feature?
See lessThe paranormal cases led a spiritual scientist to a mysterious world – a place where Vietnamese folklores collide and reveal a terrible curse between the Dragon and Fairy families, where she will finally find her destiny.
His being spiritual is interesting but merely a detail in the logline, since it doesn't contribute to the Inciting Event-Character-Goal dynamicLooks like you have a potential story, which could benefit from the specificity of the "folklore" and the "curse" and his/her "destiny"Try and express it inRead more
His being spiritual is interesting but merely a detail in the logline, since it doesn’t contribute to the Inciting Event-Character-Goal dynamic
Looks like you have a potential story, which could benefit from the specificity of the “folklore” and the “curse” and his/her “destiny”
Try and express it in this simple format below:
“This particular event forces this particular character towards this particular goal”
, focusing mainly on how the scientist’s involvement in this mystery leads him to his objective goal
It tells us a scientist becomes a part of this mystery
See lessThen leaves us hanging there..