Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • About
  • Questions
  • Answers
  • Best Answers
  1. Posted: April 16, 2018In: SciFi

    After the catastrophic earthquakes around the world, a seismologist must uncover the reason behind the mysterious stoppage of his time at 2:00 AM, else he remains in the past.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 16, 2018 at 3:49 pm

    its a great idea!! some trimming...After his time stops at 2 AM, a seismologist uncovers the mystery behind the catastrophic earthquake or risk remaining in the pastIt's a cool inciting incident but if the time stopped for him, others are frozen right? That might get uncinematic, since who will he tRead more

    its a great idea!! some trimming…
    After his time stops at 2 AM, a seismologist uncovers the mystery behind the catastrophic earthquake or risk remaining in the past

    It’s a cool inciting incident but if the time stopped for him, others are frozen right? That might get uncinematic, since who will he talk to?
    ____________________________________________________

    What if he discovers someone unpaused and chases her to discover a whole group of unpaused people?

    After encountering another unpaused human, a seismologist must solve the mystery of frozen time or risk remaining in the past

    A group of unpaused people in the frozen world will drive your Act II

    The first half could be Grand Theft Auto!!

    Upon realising they are infact “trapped”
    The second half will force them to split into 2 forces: “those to would like to stay in the past” will prevent the “those who’ve had their fun and would like to return to their kids”

    suggested title: stopwatch

    My Best wishes ashes123!

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  2. Posted: April 15, 2018In: Drama

    An opinionated former cult-member must convince his equally-opinionated family to leave the same cult before they commit the ultimate sacrifice – themselves. TITLE: Born to Die

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 15, 2018 at 1:17 pm

    Agreed with the above, this supercool idea would benefit greatly from a simple inciting event And definitely deluded/brainwashed over opinionated I don't get why he needs to be "former cult member" though. Can he be a member too and this news of the comet shook the cult out of him? Otherwise great fRead more

    Agreed with the above, this supercool idea would benefit greatly from a simple inciting event
    And definitely deluded/brainwashed over opinionated
    I don’t get why he needs to be “former cult member” though. Can he be a member too and this news of the comet shook the cult out of him?
    Otherwise great film with great stakes!
    Best wishes

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  3. Posted: April 12, 2018In: Drama

    Over a psychotherapy session, a man with failing marriage and too much history starts falling in love with his female therapist and must be stopped or she’d lose her license

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 12, 2018 at 10:20 pm

    If you're sure about the license thing... "When a troubled man begins fessing his fondness for her, the therapist must convince him otherwise, or risk losing her license" (since she has the objective goal anyway) But there's so much else she could do, "convincing him" seems illogical HER GOAL "to saRead more

    If you’re sure about the license thing…

    “When a troubled man begins fessing his fondness for her, the therapist must convince him otherwise, or risk losing her license”

    (since she has the objective goal anyway)

    But there’s so much else she could do, “convincing him” seems illogical

    HER GOAL “to save her license”
    maybe research some more….

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
1 … 8 9 10 11 12 … 17

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 8,000
  • Reviews 32,189
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,716

screenwriting courses

Adv 120x600

aalan

Explore

  • Signup

Footer

© 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.