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  1. Posted: March 15, 2018In: Drama

    After a dancer loses her competition, she turns to a skilled street fighter to up her game for the upcoming competition.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 15, 2018 at 1:29 am

    I find it interesting. kindly add more detail such as "how exactly does he ups her game?" (also, where is the major conflict?) does the plot have a possibility for them to fall in love and complicate the things a little bit? good luck leviathan!!! PS. have you seen the Peaceful Warrior (2006) by VicRead more

    I find it interesting.
    kindly add more detail such as “how exactly does he ups her game?”
    (also, where is the major conflict?)
    does the plot have a possibility for them to fall in love and complicate the things a little bit?
    good luck leviathan!!!

    PS. have you seen the Peaceful Warrior (2006) by Victor Salva?

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  2. Posted: March 14, 2018In: Thriller

    E.T.A. is about a professional contract killer, who works as a flight attendant, enabling her to travel the world performing political assassinations.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 14, 2018 at 5:56 am

    a clever logic. so it's easy for her to operate. still, all the three essential elements are missing The Role, The Goal and The Inciting Incident discuss "what forces her out of her typical" & "what's at stake" to discover your Inciting incited discuss "a result of which, she must __________" toRead more

    a clever logic. so it’s easy for her to operate.
    still,
    all the three essential elements are missing
    The Role,
    The Goal and
    The Inciting Incident

    discuss “what forces her out of her typical” & “what’s at stake” to discover your Inciting incited
    discuss “a result of which, she must __________” to discover her Goal
    discuss “what’s her role in the scheme of the three act structure (at large)” to discover her Role

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2018In: Drama

    A private investigator who tracks people by dowsing must protect the man a vicious client hires him to find, as they may hold a clue to the origin of his abilities.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 14, 2018 at 1:24 am

    who are "they"?

    who are “they”?

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